The family is the base of the
society, in her you learn principles and
values like honesty, respect, tolerance, amiability, generosity etc.
Before the technology, the family
was meeting on the table and they talk about the things that happened their
around the day and eat, alsoo They were
always together but now the family has changed for the technology the family
has been separated and have many
problems between they. They do not walk united like before. and
always they are addicts to this objects
like the cellphone, the ipad, computer,etc.
Nowadays, the mains problems of
families are:
now the teenagers argue whit their
parents only because the parents wants the good for they; the kids of today are
rebels and the fathers lost their authority; the fathers cant talk whit their
sons because their are addict to the
tecnology. also the enough communication; the separation of the fathers because
they dont talk about the relationship.
In conclusion It is good to be
careful with the family union and have a horary to use technology because
excessive use can lead to addiction and talk between the family and going out
and doing family activities. and make
family unity strong
I liked your essay, since I like how it was written, it does not only talk about technology, but also tells us about the problems that the family has. Also causing the technology, and that the family has lost its values because of their children or causes of the family. And I also liked the order in which you wrote it, How do you start in the introduction and terminations with very brief conclusions, and not very extensive, that makes. The reader is more attracted to the text, and in addition to making it easier to understand, and read it with the naked eye, and also analyzing it seems very very good, punctuation, commas and points are fine. As personal opinion the text is excellent. Congratulations. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteEffectively the technology in families have caused great isolation, loneliness and neglect their real life, I consider that in homes should be fixed simple rules for a better coexistence.
ReplyDeleteI think the text is necessary because we must pay more attention to our communication in family and talk about everyday things and situations that happen. Congratulations!
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ReplyDeleteI also think it important to set schedules to use technology